Rough Cut Feedback 2

 

This is our second take of our rough cut to which is still incomplete. However we have more of a structure developing to which helps the viewer understand the storyline. We plan on colour grading once we've completed the video as then will can visualise how we want it to look, as the structure will be complete. Once we have order of our video figured out we will start putting effects onto certain clips such as slow motion onto the over the shoulder walking shots to make it more effective. We also need to re-film a couple studio shots to complete our intro.